we have been writing about the holidays. we had to include a true part of the holidays and false part. we had to make up a name for a character mine is called bubble bum and then we made a storyboard about it.
Hi my name is Zara from Paparoa Range school.I like how you have put more than one character in your story.Next you could put capital letters in little burp at the bottom of your story board. I am also writing about my holidays.
Your story got very interesting at the second two parts. Maybe next time you can work on the spelling a bit more. Last time I went to the pool the lifeguards were kroll and kicked me out of the Deep pool.
hi ruby I like your work especially how the sea animals turn into monsters next time you could give your story a happy story finding and tell what the true and false parts are from wilem
Hi Ruby, I think you must have learnt some of your wonderful graphic skills from your family. Like everyone else who has commented on your blog I think the sea monsters.
Hi Ruby I like how you have added interesting photos and words. Next time I think you could check your spelling. Its really cool how you have added monsters into it and now it looks like the monsters crawling out of the pool.
Hi my name is Zara from Paparoa Range school.I like how you have put more than one character in your story.Next you could put capital letters in little burp at the bottom of your story board. I am also writing about my holidays.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Harry at paparoa range school.
ReplyDeleteYour story got very interesting at the second two parts. Maybe next time you can work on the spelling a bit more. Last time I went to the pool the lifeguards were kroll and kicked me out of the Deep pool.
I like it and it is interesting and I like how you added sea animals which turn into monsters which is pretty cool.
ReplyDeletehi ruby I like your work especially how the sea animals turn into monsters
ReplyDeletenext time you could give your story a happy story finding and tell what the true and false parts are from wilem
Hi Ruby,
ReplyDeleteI think you must have learnt some of your wonderful graphic skills from your family.
Like everyone else who has commented on your blog I think the sea monsters.
hi Ruby
ReplyDeletei like the color on make it stand out and i like the pictures on storyboard but next time you could give it a good name
Hi Ruby I like how you have added interesting photos and words. Next time I think you could check your spelling. Its really cool how you have added monsters into it and now it looks like the monsters crawling out of the pool.
ReplyDeletethank you Savannah because they actually are crawling out of the pool because no one else thought they were so thank you. - Ruby
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