Tuesday 11 December 2018

I am a eagle.

2 comments:

  1. next time can you put in noowill writing. I like the eagle and the mouse eating the cheese. I like how you are doing the background. I like how you ritse by you. I like how you put the piek cloose. And i like how you put a goodnde eagle.

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  2. Hello Ruby,
    It is fantastic to once again read your writing on your blog. You have made great strides with your writing this year. The part I enjoyed in your writing was the use of the word forms "a glistening horizon slowly forms through the sky." Maybe because you have picture of a mouse with cheese you could include a description of your prey. Your visuals should match the writing. Do you know what I mean by visuals? Get back to me with your answer.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.